Open Poetry #31 |
grey whisper |
Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
"...why does my skeleton pursue me |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is really neat. I like the way you do these. "Love isn't blind, it just only sees what matters." William Curry |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Temperature falling snow drifting white on white |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
so many events in such a sweet package...loved it |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
To get such a full picture, with so few words,,,,wonderful Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
Grey caught my focus in this. Over and over again, yep..."grey". What is the difference between Gray and Grey? I also then strolled off to think of the Grey Man of Pawley's Island. I don't much believe in ghost stories, or do I? They are quite chilling. Much like "grey" in your write. It is haunting me, this standout of an impression. McLean |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
this touches the mind and it's as if I feel the feathers and the whispers against my ears and cheeks and I can hear the dust being swept up by the sky Wow, what a magnificent poem and presentation! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
So much powerful emotion in such a small package! ~ARH love and hugs Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gorgeous |
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