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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2004-04-07 02:33 PM

Spark and spackle…laid down coats
Flare and flourish…winsome notes
Kind and careful…hope and fear
Smile and dodge…the truth too near

Pale and petty…truth or dare
Flushed and ruddy…warm aware
Ditch and run…the fast track scout
Silent said of love found out

Copyright Kkh 4/7/04

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-04-07 02:33 PM

WOW...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-04-07 02:38 PM

AMAZING!!! I love this Kathleen!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2004-04-07 02:40 PM

BRAVA!!!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2004-04-07 03:25 PM

I liked the to and fro of this write. It felt like I was skipping double dutch! lol

EA

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

5 posted 2004-04-07 04:16 PM

Lovely write!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2004-04-07 08:23 PM

I think I stubbed a toe!!

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

7 posted 2004-04-07 09:17 PM

much enjoyed

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

8 posted 2004-04-07 10:06 PM

TD,
This is awesome! I think it is my favorite of yours, but there are soooo many great ones, it'd take me quite some time to decide with certainty. You really have insight to how emotions work! Enjoyed.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2004-04-08 03:52 AM

bravo!

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

10 posted 2004-04-11 05:56 PM

nice...I loved the fun rhythm and cadence of the write.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

11 posted 2004-04-11 05:59 PM

Loved it...especially the way it ended - perfect!!

jwesley

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

12 posted 2004-04-11 07:59 PM

WOW!!!!!

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