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The Morning Light
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The Morning Light |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
The Morning Light A silent sun-set begins its journey into the night. Peeking little bolts of orange, and golden rays of light… Sheltering peering eyes focused with enchantment as papaya trees sway, beneath Mauna Loa’s rouge light… The sea sings its rhythmic melody, against white sands and rocky shore While dolphins play as spirited children, near the ocean’s floor… Our thoughts touch and glimmer, at the lighting of a flickering torch Our shared feelings are warmed and chilled, across a grassy porch… In the palms of my hand I rest your delicate features, While pressing our lips together, to become that evening’s creature… The scent of ginger and exotic tropical is whispering at the night air As a cool breeze swims in off the ocean, echoing through your hair… Gently we press into the night, into dreams of cotton candy, Where dreams are real and life is not, where reality is a flute of brandy Until the day is new and waking is too, and a melody is true, cooing a breath of the morning light, me and you In the morning light… |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
JL, absolutely beautiful scenery you display here! Love, Margherita  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Shhh....a tender moment... Just lovely! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You could knock me over with a feather right about now! I could scarcely breathe with the overwhelming beauty and sensuousness of this gracious and touching piece of writing! This was beyond lovely!   EA |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
JL, This is beautiful! Take Care, ~Laura~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful imagery here |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Such subtle play of the words, caressing the feeling of the ocean breeze. Wonderful write. TD |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very tender...very lovely...much enjoyed. Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
a very aromatic delicious scene..very nice |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
you are a morning light, which shines the whole day through...lovely thoughts and verse, romantic all the way through...smiles and hugs for your happiness....luv Lee J. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Your words awaken all the senses. Beautiful writing yet again. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
JL -- this was beautiful; I really could imagine the scene, you painted it so well. ......jo |
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