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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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The anger is so wearying I want to ask him if he knows that it's not this-- nor is it that-- it's just the way it goes... Carry on, oh carry on in the name of Dean. "You're tearing me apart!" I scream-- he doesn't get the joke. Brando he replaced James Dean, then Marlon grew too fat to pout and even Eminem will soon need something new to bitch about. It's just the fact that no one knows... the full effects of full moon phase and the way that time plays games underneath the skin. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Karen, this is a WOW poem..absolutely love it... and this.. Eminem will soon need something new to bitch about. This.. made me smile.. he will indeed. adding this to my library.  M Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"It's just the fact that no one knows... the full effects of full moon phase and the way that time plays games underneath the skin." It sure does Karen...it sure does. Looooove this one! Hugs pretty lady~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
It was different. I like thinkers. -Juju |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
you have such a talent wowzer Karen!!  ~~**~~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I just love the way you come up with this stuff!!! As every other thing I've read by you this is Great! Love it. jwesley |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You remind me of my Crepe of Skin... only you do it so much better! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Carry on, oh carry on in the name of Dean. "You're tearing me apart!" I scream-- he doesn't get the joke. Yes, James Dean. Are you as tormented as he was in that film dear Karen? Maybe we all are with the moon in full.  hugs, Chrislane |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"It's just the fact that no one knows... the full effects of full moon phase and the way that time plays games underneath the skin." What timing. I was needing something to blame for my recent state of mind...  Hiya K. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I want to ask him if he knows that it's not this-- nor is it that-- it's just the way it goes... ~~~ It's just the fact that no one knows... the full effects of full moon phase and the way that time plays games underneath the skin. =========================== OH, me thinks YOU know. What I know is I love what your rhyme does under my skin. I hope you know just how very cool this poem is... yeah...you know... how can you not... you wrote this.......... Brando he replaced James Dean, then Marlon grew too fat to pout and even Eminem will soon need something new to bitch about. you rock baby...and it rolls me.  Home is a feeling I buried in you ... |
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EternitysHorizon Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 145Twilight's Orchestra |
Moon child dream glory cometh with stars ablaze and the veracity to see all comes from underneath... nicely done "High on the Mountain, where the Sun stil Shines, and the water runs a little lazy." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you can write about anything and make it cool |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
 Just...  "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You state a truth that can't be denied. Smart poetess, very well done! Love, Margherita |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Yep. It's a sad day when my own angst wears me out.  But then maybe that's a good thing. (Eh, Susan?  )Love to all with hugs. (It's best not take the moods too seriously at this point in life. heh heh heh) |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Ya know it does no good to ask...they only hear the words they want and its never the ones they truly need to listen to...hugs girlie |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Ya do some powerful word play my gal. Enjoyed. TD |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Karen...Sounds like you need to suck a few MUD BUG HEADS and kill a few BUDS. Hope things get better. Oh yah how you been doing? Long time no see. Are you ready for another HOT New Orleans Summer???? Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
don't step on my blue suede shoes... you can do anything... for love but I won't do that! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
the full effects of full moon phase and the way that time plays games underneath the skin." And I took this from you as exactly the way I am feeling - so thank you Cajun Queen, as I am sick of this myself. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Second read...and library filing...  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I'm in for a second reading too oh and how this...... The anger is so wearying I want to ask him if he knows that it's not this-- nor is it that-- it's just the way it goes... speaks to me right now... sigh. Gorgeous.Mxx Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
How you distill life so well! A talent which I so admire. You are the bomb sweet friend.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Grinning at you |
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