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DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2004-04-05 05:11 PM

Yes - another Hawk

but please dont tell anyone

Dave
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On a cold dark night I traced your eyes in the lamplight watching darkness

hiding the glow of your painted face

Walls watching your sense of belonging

Confidence your only trait

Swirling

You danced around a darkness

Value dripped as a jewel

Lighting a bauble

Kicked into a fire
Sparkling blazing

into a darkening night

small words muttered

hasty retreats

yet you sat there as if the world could end and you dance on the ethos

for no-one could

hold you

yet you dance holding blackness, wearing it as a tribute to dance

Your words to me

Find me

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2004-04-05 05:17 PM

Beautiful, Dave.

This is truly captivating, m'friend.

I enjoyed this very much.

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-04-05 05:38 PM

Thanks love

Dave

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

3 posted 2004-04-05 07:13 PM

A special one Dave-- enchanting!

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

4 posted 2004-04-06 12:11 PM

Hey Dave,
This is a goooood one.
I like it.

:-)

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2004-04-06 12:23 PM

Dave,
Interesting write, enjoyed.

jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

6 posted 2004-04-06 02:09 PM

I like the way you write, the short lines make the thoughts all the more powerful

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2004-04-06 02:11 PM

"
for no-one could

hold you

yet you dance holding blackness, wearing it as a tribute to dance

Your words to me

Find me"

Your beautiful words dance gently down the page.
Much enjoyed Dave!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Before befriending butterflies
you have to meet with midnight moths.~

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

8 posted 2004-04-06 03:38 PM

Very interesting. A delight to read!

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2004-04-06 04:41 PM

Walls watching your sense of belonging

Wow!

Love, Margherita

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

10 posted 2004-04-06 04:46 PM

These words whirl around me and make me dizzy with delight. Enjoyed. Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

11 posted 2004-04-06 05:15 PM

Only words I can say

are

thank you

Dave

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