Open Poetry #31 |
Insatiable Love for You |
JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Insatiable Love for You I can see that rich sweetness in your eyes so true, I can smell your delicate scent in my mind’s memory too… Being without you makes for a sad and lonely tune, I sing and hum it daily, when I reminisce about you… I hear your soft voice chiming, and your captive silly laugh, reminding me of how warm you were, just on my behalf. Why was I so blind, and so miserable not to see, just how sweet and loving, you really were to me? I can only guess for now, if your eyes are still as bright, and hope for you, someone special, to enjoy that glowing light. I would end this rhyme right now, if there were not this want in me, this insatiable love for you, will never set me free... I am captive by my thoughts of you, and surely always will, until I die, then beyond, I await that moments thrill. To see you again, to love you again, are my prayers and hope to be, and to someday hear you say, you are still in love with me. |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
Ah dont i know this feeling...nicely done Can you hear my cries, can you hear my pleads, will you watch me burn...or would you bleed for me? |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
JL, Don't believe I have seen you before...welcome (and if I did, just ignore my dementia). Very heartfelt writing. Susan "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautifully and thoughtfully written JL |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very nicely done. Enjoyed. Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
romantic! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
very beautiful... it's a little strange though...I have an ex gf from Tex who I think about from time to time...and I often wonder about her too. Though I'm happy with my life and all some people never leave our hearts. Well done, this touches the heart! Take care, Amy "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May your insatiable love for him be sated some day... I really felt the yearning in this touching poem of love. Warm, welcoming hugs, EA |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Your words of love flow so beautifully and are so much enjoyed by this reader. Take care.........Sue I am in motion |
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