Open Poetry #31 |
The Sea Will Provide |
JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
The Sea Will Provide Sails are filled with a warm southern breeze tantalizing aroma builds, comforting me… Days past, forgotten, echoed in your raven hair Whispering of gallant days, now not so vivid, or clear… Dreams quietly hold my thought in a stare, thoughts Of dreamy sunsets, or the moon lighted evenings we might have shared… Captivated by your words, your charming fresh scent, your philosophical bond How could I dare capture those thoughts, in-slaving your memories as my own? The sea is my home; on her days I am bewitched, as the spine of this ship I will delight in her as does the wind; and I can only pray, she too, in me… This day is late, but the sharing of memories so peaceful, so gentle and kind. Although the furry of storms are weary on my flesh, they do strengthen my soul in depth … As I have seen what has past with my eyes, my heart and mind, So I would be so incline to visit the future as it too passes by… As the sea watches in care that my sails are filled with that warm breeze She holds tight to your memories while distant rocky cliffs hold us at bay Turning and sailing towards the horizon yet never gaining on its edge at play She sings her song to me, a melodic rolling melody: The sea will provide, the sea will provide… JL |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
beautiful and gentle and Welcome to Passions...you've made such a lovely entrance! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS JL! Very beautiful entrance post! I look forward to seeing more of your work. Please check your email for a special Passions greeting. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Before befriending butterflies |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
An amazing first post! Great images, metaphors! Welcome to Passions! Grover. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
JL The sea feels like home to me sometimes also. Your poem is beautiful! Welcome to Passions. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Welcome to Passions...you've captured sentiments graced to us by God...ahhhh the sea what a teacher, and look at the words she has place in your arms....a tremendous write! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
JL...welcome to Passions! I'm sure I can vouch for many - we are going to appreciate your talents very much! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well hello! Welcome! Glad to have you and I will sure be looking for your name here enjoyed this beautiful first write! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Thank you all so much! What a warm and friendly greeting. I have scanned through many of the writings here, and to say the least, this is a beautiful site and there are a heck of a lot of beautiful postings and writers here too. Again thanks. JL |
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zippi Member
since 2004-03-31
Posts 56California |
Oh! What a lovely write. My heart sings, my soul aches, absolutely grand poetry. Rene` |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Hello my friend. So glad you are now with this loving family of Passions.These loving folks will gather you close and drink thy beauty from your words. Welcome my dear, dear friend. Hugs Bon-Bon |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome to Passions JL. What a beautiful write to have offered us! Yes, the sea really does provide us with a bounty, and I sure hope we learn to care for it's health better than in the recent past, so that generations from now, people will still find such things to write about and post on these blue pages. hope you enjoy both days and nights here |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Wow!! I'm so pleased I found this masterpiece. A truly stunning piece of writing, JL. Welcome to Passions! Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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