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majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

0 posted 2004-04-05 04:57 AM

whispers

thrice a day my nerves jangle,
dance a jig as if passing amps,
thrills in the chills of offices;

she always whispers when she talks
on the phone; cubicles are unprivate,
and so my torture is quietly done;

once after arriving,
once just before lunch,
once when starting the commute,
and the delay till leaves me frayed.

anywhere, anytime a hand on my chest,
a kiss on my cheek at a party
and then a whisper in my ear;

succulent lips and a sandpaper tongue,
teasing, daring, embarrassing, me
because it never fails.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2004-04-05 08:57 AM

Zaheer~
I 'almost' felt that I was eavesdropping on some private whispers~
Excellently portrayed~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2004-04-05 09:10 AM

majnu
Enjoyed the read.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2004-04-05 09:16 AM

hmmmmm...

A whisper and warm breath on the neck...

nice..

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-04-05 09:18 AM

Very nicely penned...enjoyed the read.
Hugs~

~Before befriending butterflies
you have to meet with midnight moths.~

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2004-04-05 10:32 AM

Very nice indeed. Enjoyed. Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

6 posted 2004-04-05 11:25 AM

Brought the shiver to the page...
WEll done.
TD

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2004-04-05 12:32 PM

It's nice to read you again, majnu.
Yes, a soft whisper, a gentle touch, or that special glance...whether intended to or not, they do have an effect on both mind and body.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-04-05 12:35 PM

nicely done, I felt your feelings

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