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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-04-04 04:19 PM

Watching You Watching Me

I see your face behind the scenes
knowing you are watching me.
I remember those days when
you would sneak a peek,
but I knew, I always knew
and played your game.

At night, sometimes you intertwine
with recent thoughts and your face
appears on another's body,
confusing me even more.
The old desires creeping in,
no longer locked away, respect
no longer an antiquated thought.

There will always be
a special place I can travel to,
if only in my mind, where two people
ran hand in hand to the top of a hill
and watched over, where their future
would take hold.

They say you only love like that once.
I wouldn't know the truth of that,
for second chances have yet to come my way.
Timing is everything, and for now
I have time on my side.

And I will smile behind the scenes,
knowing you are watching me~

M

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (04-04-2004 05:26 PM).]

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2004-04-04 04:53 PM

Maureen,
Reads like a fishing story to me.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-04-04 05:15 PM

I see a little bit of me and Bluesy in here

we need to get together, all of us...that would be so cool!

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2004-04-04 05:30 PM

Not sure what kind of a fishing story you mean Sy...but 'tis the truth

M

Dixie, Bluesy and I have met, slightly different lives but we each have the same needs *s
( and wasn't it you who once wrote you visited a brother in DC...if so the next time you visit, let me know...I am not that far away.)
thanks
M

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2004-04-04 06:33 PM

It's a pretty heady view from the mountain top.
Really loved your thoughts here Maureen,
as well as the memories you've tucked away.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-04-04 07:17 PM

well I thought I would have been flying up for Easter but it didn't happen...hopefully soon though

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2004-04-04 08:33 PM

Lori, I was going back over 30 years of memories...sometimes I can tell he is watching me as I do things around here...
sometimes he "hangs around" a bit too much

Thanks...
hugs
M

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

7 posted 2004-04-05 11:26 AM

nice premise. an interesting look at the lack of closure.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

8 posted 2004-04-05 11:31 AM

feels good knowing "someone special waits and watches"

a "not-so-secret" secret audience

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

9 posted 2004-04-05 12:10 PM

There will always be
a special place I can travel to,
if only in my mind, where two people
ran hand in hand to the top of a hill
and watched over, where their future
would take hold.

Yes, so true and maybe, the beauty and mystery of life itself....

beautiful read

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2004-04-05 12:27 PM

Beautiful thoughts here Maureen.
Much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~Before befriending butterflies
you have to meet with midnight moths.~

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