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In wires pull |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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is it possible to delight you in the rattle of a barbed-wired night? where desire lingers in sweep of street your eyes bewitch in flick of lid with the corners of your lips turned up wide stirring me the sky is arrogant flowers crown your head in a silent climb of vine and in wires pull… you’re as succulent as the berry tree in spring 05/04/04 Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. (by Virginia Woolf) [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (04-06-2004 02:34 AM).] |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, I love this! Keepin' it! Chris  Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
How cool is this.........very!! Love the soft and sharp edges to this, sweet Maree~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Beautiful writing, Maree. Loved it.  Hugs, Ethel |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maree Sensually appealing and as always filled with fresh images. Love it!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
in awe smiling |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Cool! Juju |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
it is too long since i read your words. wonderfully stirring. -majnu |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Catching my breath ... oh! Love, Margherita |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I recently wrote of my daughter, talking about how compelling the truly beautiful are when they don't realize their own beauty... oh m'lovely, that is you too...  |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
"staining me crimson" a delicous colour this entire work of art is... tasty, sensual, and enjoyed |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
your eyes play me in flick of lid with the corners of your lips turned up wide stirring me the sky is arrogant flowers crown your head in a silent climb of vine ================================= Oh man this is such a cool write... such unique imagery and analogy. me thinks yer pulling some strings of your own poetess girlie.  the sky is arrogant what a great line and image that is!! very cool indeed!! Home is a feeling I buried in you ... |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Mmy Mmy Mmy-- It seems every poem I read by you is unique. The more you write the less I recognize your writing--lol. Lovely poem dear. Hugs n kotc There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
luscious and a with a twist of tease ...oh soo nice dark angel woof woof ....... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Chris.. thank you so much Lori, thank for the "cool" glad you enjoyed. Ethel.. thank you so much. Martie, thank you sweet poetess Passing Shadows..Thank you..smiling with you. Juju..Thanks for the "cool" majnu, nice to see you here and Thank you. Looking forward to reading your words Margherita...anche io.. smiling.. thank you Karen..I don't know what to say, that is the nicest thing anyone has ever said to me. Love you  Thank you beautiful.muted... Thank you so much for your lovely reply, I've made a few changes though. Janet Marie...Thank you for the "cool" "unique" and the "great" and for popping by. Jamie, you're wondermous.. yanno thank you m'friend Oh.. note the changes? Thank you for that too.Wolf...thank you so much and woof woof back at ya *smiling* Thank you all for your lovely replies, support and compliments...they mean so very much to me. Maree. Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Hey bella, lavaed this poem, both versions |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Maree, Still all this time after reading you, I'm left in awe...beautiful writing, full of so much of you that I've come to love... and in wires pull… you’re as succulent as the berry tree in spring This is definitely one of the coolest lines I've ever read! It's so good to see you again. Take care, Amy "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW Maree.... I love this!!! B E A U T I F U L !! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Before befriending butterflies |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
wow, u got me speechless here, loved it! *zenny* |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
"you're as succulent as the berry tree in spring" ^*~Wonderful~*^ This was such a beautiful read I wasn't really ready for it! Excellent poem. ^*~Kimberley~*^  "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
How did I miss this piece of magic? Gads, I'm glad it was bumped back up! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"you’re as succulent as the berry tree in spring" ~ He sounds good enough to eat! lol  EA |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
ahhh the scent of love in the air |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thank you all so very much for dropping by to read, I appreciate it so much.... And Bello.....Thank you for advice given Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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