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Long Shadows |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 Long shadows Long shadows greet our early morn As promise stretches this, our day. So, kiss me sweet good morn and bless Our golden trails that lay Before us like a promise, kept Then dry the tears that might be wept. Long shadows greet our early dusk No matter, stature does not mind, For looming lengthy is this love Where two in blend shall bind, Before us is the promise, kept Long gone are tears that were once wept. Trust long shadows of two who stand To greet days come nights, hand in hand. ~*~ In honor of a couple who celebrate 40 years of love and compromise... Happy Anniversary, J&M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Beautiful, you are a dear.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
What beautiful words of love you have penned for a special couple. May I take a second to wish them a very Happy Anniversary as well. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
stunning! very lovely Kari. what a beautiful gift. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
a wonderful way to celebrate so many years of love and friendship  |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
That's a beautiful tribute, Karilea. I hope they have a chance to read it. I hope also it is a tribute for you and yours. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
sharing compromise is much much better then giving beliefs away...good concept, as well as a lovely picture which shares the idea. Thank you Sunshine |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very pretty... love and compromise, ain't that the truth! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is beautiful Karilea! hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I think this is really pretty with cool love images entwined......Love these two lines... "For looming lengthy is this love Where two in blend shall bind" Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
"Before us is the promise, kept Long gone are tears that were once wept." This has such a confident outlook on the future, you evoke great happiness within this poem.  Kind Regards to the happy couple!  ^*~Kimberley~*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well this exquisite poem will most certainly add to the anniversary joy of the happy couple! ~ and I would like to wish for them continued happiness and vibrant good health!  Linda |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Beautiful way to say "Happy Anniversary". believe in what your heart feels... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A lovely tribute Karilea... Maree Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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