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Mundane Loop
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Mundane Loop I dodge the loop of mundane throw There is a simple trick I know I close my eyes to lights congeal And open them to wiles appeal I drift more often than I should Perhaps more often than is good But fantasy is rainbows road And I am really but a toad Sleeping in a place of trips In stasis for a kiss on lips To wake upon a lovely face Wearing weaves mantilla lace She waits for me each wile you see And we engage a phantoms key Unlock a door to dreamers goal And spend a night of soul to soul Now I ask you my gracious friend Is this not a better end? |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Mornin SY Great little write to start the day and a lovely ending.....Yes a better end for sure and a clever write. Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Seymour, as is the norm, a wonderful write and a great ending, very much enjoyed my friend, thanks for sharing. Sincerely Rick |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ethome Thank you Ethome, you did pretty well yourself today. Rick Thank you my friend for your read and reply. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And I am really but a toad Sleeping in a place of trips In stasis for a kiss on lips =================================== Ater reading these rhymes from you ... there is but one thing to do!! A frog youre not, but what a cute ploy ... Cmon girlies ... lets KISS the boy!!!  |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
"Fantasy is rainbows road". What a wonderful statement, Sy. I truly enjoyed this poem this morning. Wonderfully written words!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
A simply beautiful write for this Sunday morn Seymour! Hugs to you, Chris  Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, So now that you kissed me awake, what now??? WWRS Maybe Randy knows.   scorpio Wonderful reply, thank you. Chris, Morning sweety. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah now Sy, this, truly a treat but Merlin came, and left a gift!  He said "Feed the boy all he'll eat! then with a KISS his spirits lift!" |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
AAAAAAWWWWWW you get all the kisses......... Pout pout pout pout pout Ain't doin nothin at all |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Ethome...come and get in line! We're kicking our heels up all of the time!  And if you behave like the poets we know there aren't enough kisses for us to bestow!  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, what a kissy thread this is, dear Seymour .... hmmm well the ending is magical! There is no greater feeling than "soul to soul". So beautiful! Hugs. Margherita |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
LOL! Thank you the Sunshine girl! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Is that you in a merlin costume?? Ethome, And you aren't even a toad. LOL Sunshine, We thank you sweety. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita What no Kiss? LOL |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you are a prince in toads rhyme ... but any excuse to kiss you is just fine!! LOL *winkiewinkie* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, So be it. and one for good measure |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy The answer's yes! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gosh! this place goes so fast I missed this one...it's afternoon now, an hour lost...but it's good to know some things never change  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie Glad of that. Passing, Thank you dear. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
as long as you keep us drifting with you, Sy *s M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, I'd never let you go. |
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