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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2004-04-04 01:13 AM


4:30
the words are flowing from your mouth
like a leaky tap
words thrown hear and there
incoherent ramblings...
4:38
a glance towards the window for freedom
its making sense now
4:40
your crying..god your crying..
i thought you said you never cried..
4:55
please don't leave..

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2004-04-04 03:42 AM


sad
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
2 posted 2004-04-04 08:47 AM


I could feel your emotions in this writing - You must try and focus on the happiness that this relationship brought you - regrets hinder your present...be strong and let your soul do the healing  
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