Open Poetry #31 |
Sheena Rose |
Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Up through the fine mist across the field, rises the phantom of my lost child; her high voice drifts gently across the breeze; her small face my gathering blithe dream sees. This autumn dawning is fragile and soft, as ever her memory floats aloft; my little girl's eyes still sparkle and shine; she calls to me "mama, oh mama mine!" Sheena, my moon daughter tender and dear, come to my meadow of memoirs here; lend me your memories carefree and sweet, in quavering autumn's oppresive heat. [This message has been edited by Rosemary J. Gwaltney (04-03-2004 07:36 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhRosemary~ Making me cry, you are ...~ This is just so very, very tenderly rendered~ Sending *HUGS* your way~ I love you and Dale and all your children~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Surely Sheena Rose's eyes still sparkle and shine. The connection of the hearts is real and alive. Such a very touching write! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Rosemary "her small face my gathering blithe dream sees." I feel your words like part of my own loss. So beautifully and tenderly you express the grief and the love. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Hugging you here Rosemary. Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Oh, Rosemary, what a pleasure to read your words again This is so tender and loving. Every verse is special. Take care, my dear Love Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rosemary There are many ways to touch the wind. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Rosemary... this is a beautiful and tender write. Maree. Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Rosemary, we have missed you, and your lovely tender writings. Peace be with you, and with your memories. |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Marge, Margherita, Martie, Chris, Elizabeth, Seymour, Maree, Sunshine, I thank each one of you so much for your marvelous responses! It's been a long time since I was here, and you are all just as sweet as ever! Oh, Seymour, what poetry you write - yes, there are many ways to touch the wind! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
this is so sweetly written i want to cry |
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