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Something about Love |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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~*~ You were the words to my poetry, not so long ago. Something about love inspired, far beyond the look in your eyes. A promenade in private with a purpose and a sigh, we moved in a circle of two finding ways to keep warm in the rain. I felt safe in your arms wide open to possibilities the sky was the limit, seemingly endless. But as sure as the sun sets in the west you slipped away like silk in a heart beat, without a ripple. You made it look easy to pull strings then watched me come undone. It's been a long time gone and I'll never love that way again. But I survived the unraveling, in case you ever doubted me. ~*~ |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
But I survived the unraveling, in case you ever doubted me Yup, you did....and many of us out here did as well. Good one Bluesy. hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. Hans Christian Anderson |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
But I survived the unraveling, in case you ever doubted me. That you have Ms Blues...you go girl! Maree  Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Hey nice write. So glad to catch your words. M |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"You were the words to my poetry, not so long ago. Something about love inspired, far beyond the look in your eyes." So does that make us fools for love AND poetry???  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Melancholic, but so very beautiful. And be sure, dear friend, that you will love again ... and maybe more than you did. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
"You were the words to my poetry, not so long ago. Something about love''' ~~ that makes it so unforgettable, at times heart wrenching, but worth it....I have no doubt it will touch you again....  ~~**~~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lori The thing about love is....if you open your heart again, it will find you better. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
BluesSerenade Well said.  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes well said, ditto to sy and this sinks in my heart, so sad, sweet blondie, your heart shines even in this forlorn tale of a love gone , you will rise again as always |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Well Blue, I can relate to this as well. This is a universal feeling. But as the Pips say, keep trying, 50 million?? humans can't be wrong  SG |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
--- But as sure as the sun sets in the west you slipped away like silk in a heart beat, without a ripple. --- But I survived the unraveling, in case you ever doubted me. --- did u read my mind? Just hope my story ends as good as your write |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I love a survivor! I love a poet! ERGO ... Well done! |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
You were the words to my poetry, not so long ago. Something about love inspired, far beyond the look in your eyes. Hey Bluesy , I can relate to the words above , someone inspired all my poetry of love too ...we seem to entwine and untwine , time after time Hope |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I think you only love that way once...sigh |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Lovely. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Gee, thanks for reading everyone! I appreciate you all so much. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You were the words to my poetry, not so long ago. Something about love inspired, far beyond the look in your eyes. A promenade in private with a purpose and a sigh, we moved in a circle of two finding ways to keep warm in the rain. ======================================= Classic Bluesy-girl poetry. this is a bittersweet beauty Lori. looking back in the memories...while looking ahead in the lessons learned. We grow with every goodbye. Home is a feeling I buried in you ... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Janet Marie~ Oh shoot, you made my eyes water. Thank you so much dear lady. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Lori, it's so good to read you again. I especially loved these two verses.... I felt safe in your arms wide open to possibilities the sky was the limit, seemingly endless. But as sure as the sun sets in the west you slipped away like silk in a heart beat, without a ripple. Hugs, Ethel |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
But as sure as the sun sets in the west you slipped away like silk in a heart beat, without a ripple. ~*~ Great metaphor, excellent imagery in this... surely it slipped, but left behind the survivor, who stands tall... Well done, m'dear |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you Ethel and Karilea for your kind words. I'm kinda partial to the endless ripple myself. So glad to see you two here. ~Hugs~ |
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