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Patricia
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since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

0 posted 2004-01-24 09:21 PM

Waking in His Dream

Light
of a season
could not keep
winter white
from losing its appeal
long before
the first hard freeze
or flurried flake

Though I heard the howl
through barren branch,
and saw frost upon
the withering green

I heeded not
what could be seen with sensibility
even as the chill of reality
filled the air
I dared
to hold the hand
of a summer’s promise

Still now
as five o’clock darkness
brings dreams of warmth
beneath a colorless quilt
of convictions

I hibernate
in my hideaway
slumbering in comfortable disconnect
Wrapped only in the thought
of waking in his dream.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2004-01-24 09:46 PM

I really liked this verse and how it fit so right with your title.

I heeded not
what could be seen with sensibility
even as the chill of reality
filled the air
I dared
to hold the hand
of a summer’s promise

This is such a lovely poem Patricia~
I enjoyed every word!!

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2004-01-24 09:56 PM

Wow~~!!!~~

Need I say more?

Wow@@!!@@!!@@!!

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2004-01-24 09:58 PM

Though I heard the howl
through barren branch,
and saw frost upon
the withering green

I heeded not
what could be seen with sensibility

~*~

You've got it all here.
Title. Poem. Hand in glove.
Dreams in dreams.

Well done!

C?
Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 190

4 posted 2004-01-24 10:02 PM

I think I've read a few of yours now. I like your words and style. makes good poems

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2004-01-24 10:13 PM

(smiles) Hibernate in the winter where you can store the warmth of your heart true and then when the spring draws in, escape and let your dream be animated! (big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is a beautiful dreamscape of your own, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Patricia, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

6 posted 2004-01-24 10:16 PM

I hibernate
in my hideaway
slumbering in comfortable disconnect
Wrapped only in the thought
of waking in his dream.'''

such a softer desire....you say this so well...hugsss lady

I lie awake at night
I reach out to touch
Feel you by my side
I reach I never feel you
Will I ever get to feel you again
Just one more time

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

7 posted 2004-01-25 12:29 PM

Patricia:
What a tender rendering that I could certainly connect with. Such beauty in you, flows your hand. TD

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2004-01-25 08:40 AM

Patricia - excellent write. Takes me through the cold of ice, and the warmth of waking in another's dream. Like this much...

BC

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

9 posted 2004-01-25 03:20 PM

Yes! *S* I like this very much, Patricia... what a wonderful ending! *S*

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2004-01-25 04:20 PM

Very nice Patricia...James

Richy
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

11 posted 2004-01-25 11:11 PM

Patricia, you have become
such a wonderful writer!

I am so impressed!
I loved the poem.
And I’ll be looking forward
to reading more.

Take Care,
Richy

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

12 posted 2004-01-25 11:33 PM

Pat, this write is simply exquisite, BUT Linda would like some personal direction on this one...an enquiring mind wants to know

call her at your convenience or email me

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

13 posted 2004-02-24 12:28 PM

Patricia -- this was really lovely -- I liked the word play.

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

14 posted 2004-02-24 12:40 PM

n't know how I missed this beautiful
poem the first time around. I'm so
glad that I didn't miss it this time.

Hugs

Ethel

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

15 posted 2004-02-24 07:24 PM

Patricia, your writing is absolutely wonderful. I enjoyed this emensely and I appreciate your talent ~ of which you have in great abundance!

Warm hugs & smiles,
EA

sea_of_okc
Senior Member

since 1999-06-15

Posts 568
Oklahoma City, OK, USA

16 posted 2004-02-24 08:18 PM

A very beautiful poem. Glad it got bumped up so I could enjoy it...

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

17 posted 2004-02-24 08:22 PM

This is so beautiful.

Gemini
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since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

18 posted 2004-02-24 09:44 PM

Awesome!

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

19 posted 2004-04-04 07:36 PM

Dear, got the e-mail, but the old e-mail address you use to have sent my reply back to me. Call me or send new e-mail address when you see this.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

20 posted 2004-04-05 01:43 PM

Patricia:
Have missed you. Come back soon.
TD

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