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Fisherman Junior Member
since 2000-04-14
Posts 46 |
She was like a children’s toy, a sailing ship from papered slip, creased and folded, simplistic beauty in her form, as she sailed on springtime’s breeze across a waveless pond. Alas, no anchor is attached to paper sailing ships. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Sweet poem...couldn't help but think, good thing...paper ships would sink with an anchor...Some beautiful things are just free. TD |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I know a few like this... so beautiful and graceful, until you want to catch them. This is lovely in its simplicity and truth. Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Fragile, streamlined, no weight onboard, no way to stop Yes I like it Deep Dave |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"You gotta know when to foldem' and maybe where to foldem? LOL. I enjoyed this post. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a description! nice! |
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