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Crescents |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
It hasn't taken me very long to realise I still need the quality of the words written here. Dave ********************************************** Crescents of a gentle yellowing image make their place across sounds of a world fractionally at peace Gently moving an array blinding essence to force the clean-up of today's thoughts, last night's passion, and dismissal of fragments of bliss Warming a feeling of some earth sacrifice within a feeling A bright sun appears Maybe a bright son appears to speak to you in years to come to ask of that fragrence enveloped by music and the percussion of restless breaths and pants of ideas And Family echo streams of living and dying fire burning hot in a cauldron As you watch a Son Blazing arise Dave |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
told u so... |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Yes you did Ink But you are such a Lady Dave |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Fascinating write! With Easter on the horizon, this has added poignancy. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Another great one, Dave. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The sun and the Son are both a source of LIGHT and your words give me a feeling of warmth. Love, Margherita |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dave, Enjoyed the metaphor. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Guys The Man in Black has a song If I had known you longer You might be a little stronger and maybe you'd shoot straighter than you do Dave |
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