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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2004-04-03 09:37 AM



Closure
~*Marge Tindal*~

~Closure
Heartfelt sad sigh
Spilling tears in deny
Leaving ends with a soft goodbye
Nevermore will we walk ‘cross friendship’s bridge
Meeting in the middle with love
Understanding we now
Journey alone
Closure~



~For a sweetheart of a friend who needs a little help closing the door~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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1 posted 2004-04-03 09:42 AM


It appears to me that your "sweetheart of a friend" has one in you as well!

to you both,
~ and may she make it safely to the new world on the other side of the bridge...

EO

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2 posted 2004-04-03 09:43 AM



Nicely done, Marge~~ sometimes isn't it nicer to end with a door closing softly rather than a slam?


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3 posted 2004-04-03 09:45 AM


Nicely done Marge.
I do believe this friend has another friend in you.
Hugs~

  ~Before befriending butterflies
you have to meet with midnight moths.~

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4 posted 2004-04-03 11:57 AM



Unfortunately, the 'closing' of the 'door' isn't always by choice...  
Instead, sometimes, it is abruptly slammed in one's face...

I hope that's not the case for this particular friend...

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5 posted 2004-04-03 12:51 PM





you've done it again! beautiful!

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6 posted 2004-04-03 01:18 PM


oh my..this is very sweet and loving Marge...i know she must treasure the friendship you share
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7 posted 2004-04-03 01:59 PM


Just great, Marge.
Betty
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8 posted 2004-04-03 03:30 PM


Oh Marge how do I thank you for always being there. I read this & just started crying again. Yesterday was so difficult but I did the eulogy & only had to stop & take a deep breath twice. You are a wonderful friend.
Love you,
Betty

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9 posted 2004-04-03 06:25 PM


Dear Marge:  A heart-felt poem for a friend in need.  I'm sure it is greatly appreciated!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

Marge Tindal
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10 posted 2004-04-03 07:05 PM


Thanking you all for your read and replies~

Betty~
My friend, my friend ... I send you a boodle of *Huglets* for your loss and knowing just how difficult a time this has been~
I'm always here for you sweetie~

*HUGLETS* to ALL~
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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vlraynes
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11 posted 2004-04-03 08:04 PM



So sorry to hear of your loss, Betty...
You'll be in my thoughts and prayers.

Hugs,
~Vicky

"When the power of love overcomes the love
of power the world will know peace."
--Jimi Hendrix

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12 posted 2004-04-05 05:27 AM


Marge..what a beautiful message to
a friend in need!

..Betty, hope things turn out OK sweetheart.
But just think once the door is closed
you'll be able to see the wonderment
which belies behind closed doors!!

:supergrin Keep smiling!

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

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