Open Poetry #31 |
Closure |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Closure ~*Marge Tindal*~ ~Closure Heartfelt sad sigh Spilling tears in deny Leaving ends with a soft goodbye Nevermore will we walk ‘cross friendship’s bridge Meeting in the middle with love Understanding we now Journey alone Closure~ ~For a sweetheart of a friend who needs a little help closing the door~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
It appears to me that your "sweetheart of a friend" has one in you as well! to you both, ~ and may she make it safely to the new world on the other side of the bridge... EO |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Nicely done, Marge~~ sometimes isn't it nicer to end with a door closing softly rather than a slam? M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Nicely done Marge. I do believe this friend has another friend in you. Hugs~ ~Before befriending butterflies |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Unfortunately, the 'closing' of the 'door' isn't always by choice... Instead, sometimes, it is abruptly slammed in one's face... I hope that's not the case for this particular friend... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you've done it again! beautiful! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
oh my..this is very sweet and loving Marge...i know she must treasure the friendship you share |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Just great, Marge. |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
Oh Marge how do I thank you for always being there. I read this & just started crying again. Yesterday was so difficult but I did the eulogy & only had to stop & take a deep breath twice. You are a wonderful friend. Love you, Betty |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: A heart-felt poem for a friend in need. I'm sure it is greatly appreciated! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thanking you all for your read and replies~ Betty~ My friend, my friend ... I send you a boodle of *Huglets* for your loss and knowing just how difficult a time this has been~ I'm always here for you sweetie~ *HUGLETS* to ALL~ ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
So sorry to hear of your loss, Betty... You'll be in my thoughts and prayers. Hugs, ~Vicky "When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace." --Jimi Hendrix |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
Marge..what a beautiful message to a friend in need! ..Betty, hope things turn out OK sweetheart. But just think once the door is closed you'll be able to see the wonderment which belies behind closed doors!! :supergrin Keep smiling! "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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