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No Us... No More...
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No Us... No More... |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands 
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I have to let you go mijn lief there is no us no more... how much we tried how much we loved the ocean was to big to cross the mountain was to high I don’t know how to go from here how to live without you there is only pain inside my heart is sore no us... no more... no more... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, the pain is felt here. Sadly beautiful. Love, Margherita |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Yes, sad but beautiful...  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know this well  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hauntingly sad...painfully penned. Hugs~ Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I don’t know how to go from here how to live without you =============================== Oh man...where are the tissues... heartbreaking, tender write Neeraja, welcome back to the blue pages. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
You write as a tombstone descends upon the relationship Dont let it bury you Dave |
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sea_of_okc Senior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 568Oklahoma City, OK, USA |
You got me feelin melancholy... Such strong expressions of pain and loss |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Oh dear oh dear, that's a very sad message Neeraja, breaks my heart, because I knew how happy you two were when being together. Very sad indeed, it always comes down to money, doesn't it. You're in my thoughts dear friend, be sure of that.  TitiaLike scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
Thanks for all the sweet comments, it means a lot to me!  |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
Unfortunately.. we all know this feeling too well.  Heres a smile to start your day! ^*-Kimberley-*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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