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Homecoming Queen
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Homecoming Queen |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
You're beauty impeccable. Immaculate complexion. You feel the need to masquerade, too afraid to frown. Upon your blank canvas beauty belies a painted treat. Your synthetic smile, hiding your humility behind this futility. Disposable laughter, drowning out the echo of reality. Up with the elite, its hard to compete. But someday soon you'll take a line to numb your pine. When you awake reality will be knocking at the door. "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Very fine writing Kim..enjoyed.. Thank you.. Goldenrose. ''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
I enjoyed this, Kim. |
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Fisherman Junior Member
since 2000-04-14
Posts 46 |
Nice effort, enjoyed. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
I don't know how to comment on this one. I liked it, as it PErfectLY described a few people I know regardless whether they were homecoming queens! And then again, I've known homecoming queens that are very nice people, without fascades. You carved out this character well. I enjoyed. Sadie |
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Darker Season Junior Member
since 2004-04-01
Posts 48Wisconsin |
Interesting topic with great execution. You painted such a vivid character through your words. Nice work |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
^*~*^*~*^*~*^*~*^*~*^*~*^ Thankyou all for your wonderful feedback. ...I do not know any Homecoming Queens at all because I live in England and schools and colleges here do not have such awards... We don't even have cheerleaders!! It is generally considered too elitist. However, this is basically based on a few people that I have come to know and dislike!  ^*~*^*~*^*~*^*~*^*~*^ Glad you all enjoyed! ^*~Kimberley~*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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