Open Poetry #31 |
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Lust |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania ![]() |
Lust How endearing of the youthful To think lust is for the young For they've yet to feel the rapture In a melody unsung They have sipped of pleasure's goblet Laced with subtle doubts and fears But know nothing of a vintage Mellowed sweetly through the years How ingenuous the youthful To think lust is in the eye When with age they will discover That God's gifts still mystify Passion breeds its own dimension In the deepest wells of love But the eye cannot contain Infinity of stars above How delightful of the youthful To stake claim on new fronteers That will offer untapped pleasures They'll discover through the years How endearing of the aged Who think lust is for the young And who sing a youthful melody As though it were unsung Elizabeth Santos |
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Youngatheart Member
since 2003-12-30
Posts 333 |
Oh, how true, how true!!!!!!!!!!!! and so beautifully stated. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth Ant that the truth, wonderful write. Love Sy |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Liz you nailed that thought perfectly in your poetic pleasure. Very well done! |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Passion breeds its own dimension In the deepest wells of love But the eye cannot contain Infinity of stars above How very beautiful! *S* And you're absolutely right. *S* And LOL at us being on a similar wavelength today. *S* |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now here I am smiling at the Lady who would write of lust...and in such a gentle, compassionate way as "you've not seen nothing yet, kiddos..." ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Liz...Wonderful you are!! ![]() |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Elizabeth...how wonderful this is! And how very bvery true. Hugs~ ~ Is that love I see in your eyes... |
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Michelle_loves_Mike![]() ![]()
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Lust is in the eye of the beholder,,,, Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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