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Spirits Free
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Spirits Free |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Two tin cans, joined the country miles in string Sing-a-longs…just random notes that tuned my ear to sing Sideways, looking at the other angles Shrugging off the struggled tangles Stepping out a smiles lanky wrangles Big enough for us both to fit Skips and shimmy star crossed hit Somehow you know me…the core and crumbs Strangely set pieces many fingers all thumbs Simply wandering only to discover that happiness hums Like a fine tuned engine…performance, spirit…guts Sheer dynamic…mere romantic, stealth the who’s and what’s Simple lives in time…listening and learning to be loved Sweet the view into your heart, krept softly there in friendship gloved Sending stars to birth of comets in the vast of all beloved Wandering nomadic dreams that brought you here to me Sing-a-longs…that chanced a passing glance in hopes to see Smiling eyes meet mine, reaching up to touch a fortune shaded blue Sensual reverberations ripple throughout seas of you Sending me on wild romps in moonlight bay, by two Copyright Kkh 1/29/04 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh! this is adorable! just adorable! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Wow TD, this is not only about a great romance, but just as importantly, it sounds like a great friendship. You can really feel the love, just glowing off the page... You did wonderful! Richy |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Quite a wonderful verse, TD...thank you! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathleen~ Not only did I like the real feel of this ... I was fascinated by the rhyme scheme~ Excellent poetry dear lady~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah so beautiful Kathleen... Very much enjoyed the read. Hugs~ ~ Is that love I see in your eyes... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Smiling eyes meet mine, reaching up to touch a fortune shaded blue So nice, as always~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
But to soar the graceful arc into the warmth of light. To sail the mightest blue into the waning night. To hold the hand, of trust and caring eyes.... To soar and sail....and once to realize... Excellently done Kay....you have captured it well. |
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