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The Eyes
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The Eyes |
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zippi Member
since 2004-03-31
Posts 56California |
Windows to the soul...these two. Midnight black or baby blue. Earthy brown or ocean green, Shaded somewhere in between. Brilliant, shining orbs of light, keepers of the gift of sight. Oracles of ancient history, Dancing globes of charm and mystery. Filled with tears, cast down in shame. Divulging secrets, casting blame. Curious... they dart and leap, Even in your deepest sleep. Reacting to the slightest sounds, These sentinels survey the grounds. Twins of truth, betraying lies. To know the soul, look in the eyes. www.InnerCirclePublishing.com |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
You're keepin' an eye on us. Great write! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fantastic writing...James |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
so poingant and true...lovely write my little friend! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Excellent write zippi! The eyes are definitely the window from which the light pours from our soul. ~enjoyed~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Zippi~ 'These sentinels survey the grounds. Twins of truth, betraying lies. To know the soul, look in the eyes' I liked the all of it ... but this thought certainly stood out to me~ If I haven't done so previously ... I welcome you to Passions~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Zippi: What an imagination you have. This is a marvelous write. Especially for Lee J. I must say, you are indeed an exceptionally great poet! JL  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
^*-Zippi-*^ WOW, I really wasn't ready for this wondrous write. This blew me away. It is all in the eyes, you can give the whole game away with a simple blink. I loved the line... "Divulging secrets, casting blame." This is oh so true. Eyes decide your feelings, and reveal your secrets all at once!!  Brilliantly captured. ^*-Kimberley-*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
yup... Eyes are the windows to our soul... can be beautiful or painful to see what's in it... can go both ways.. loved reading this *zenny* |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Wow... very amazing write!! I love the way you did this. Sorta unique. I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Excellent, Zippi. Welcome to Passions. I look forward to reading more of your work. Sadie |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
the eyes are our windows to the soul. this was excellant  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is a fantastic write which I agree with totally!! Enjoyed. Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
zippi -- this is the best eyes poem I've ever read! .....jo |
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