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Fissure |
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ChemicalRepose Member
since 2004-03-28
Posts 102 |
This feeling of subsequent deterioration eating away at my already chewed soul Lingering denials she reassures my hopelessness chiseling under my skin to feast upon my afflicted blood Fevering and flooding I must keep going on and on, forever purging waiting for this worm to swallow this sediment this never ending decadence Why won't this day ever grow old? My wound has been reopened now and I'm choking, and you're frizzling me down Severing be cautious now Down beneath my soil I have swallowed my pride to feed me And you are the precursor that needs me You seem to be choking now I just want to admire your frown are you in a hurry my dear? Your lurking now leaking tears your shadow is jaded now your frown is shading down and this hawk is ravenous so silent now My eyes are burning, filled with sweat and I'm swallowing my regret to surge forward in a spiral rapidly ignoring my desolate tedium I tried to warn you but your movements swallowed me whole I can not go around you I must get inside of you Break you down and abolish you to continue this eternal cycle that follows, veiled by me |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I tried to warn you but your movements swallowed me whole .. too many good lines for me to thank you for... I enjoyed your word play, Ben M |
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ChemicalRepose Member
since 2004-03-28
Posts 102 |
Thank you very much for the kind words. And I'm glad you enjoyed it. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
A freshly ploughed field of creative energy. Very good. |
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