Open Poetry #31 |
When I was Two |
zippi Member
since 2004-03-31
Posts 56California |
When I was two so young and new, I didn't have a lot to do, Just bathe and nap and play the game of learning how to say my name. Life was easy way back then And stayed that way till I was ten. When I was ten I ventured out. To see what things were all about. I looked at life through virgin eyes, That lacked the skill to decern lies. I believed in dreams come true. Til I arrived at twenty two. At twenty two I gave my heart. And had the poor thing torn apart. I learned that nothing came for free. And lived alone till thirty three. At thirty three I tried once more That lasted until thirty four. Bitter now and full of doubt. There's one thing I have figured out. No matter what I try to do, I'm no smarter now, then when I was two. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Wisdom doesn't require smarts... thanks for sharing! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'm 34 now... and you are telling the truth! |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
I hear it being said that wisdom comes with age.I keep wondering what age would that be? At times I feel as innocent as a child, then another as old as the rock of ages. I guess we all are innocent in ways where wisdom should be. When it comes to affairs of the heart we are all like children and grab the warmth of love with both hands just as a small babe grabs a lollipop for its sweet nectar. Good one sis Love Bon-Bon |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sometimes it feels that way, doesn't it? But I'll bet you are a tad wiser now than when you were two... A good, thoughtful write. Thank you! |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Very cool. Enjoyed. To tell you the truth, I think I was smarter at two. Didn't have all the baggage then. SG |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Haahaa! I know I was smarter at two! Great one Rene` JL |
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