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zippi
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since 2004-03-31

Posts 56
California

0 posted 2004-04-01 03:49 PM

Like little bits of paper,
Torn and scattered to the wind,
Hard to know just where it started
Or recognize the end.
All those dim and faded memories,
Vaguely, flickering through the mind.
Love that seemed to be eternal
Quickly lost and left behind.
It’s an easy thing to fall in love
And God!…it’s easy to fall out
All it takes is just a hint of lies
And a shadow of a doubt.
The bond that was so certain…frays
And loosens at the ends,
And the love that seemed so solid…breaks,
For love so seldom bends.
Like little bits of paper
Torn and scattered on the sea
Two hearts destroyed
And loneliness…where love was supposed to be.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-04-01 03:52 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Beautiful entrance post!
I look forward to seeing more of our work.

Please check you email for a special greeting.

~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Before befriending butterflies
you have to meet with midnight moths.~

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-04-01 04:12 PM

The bond that was so certain…frays
And loosens at the ends,
And the love that seemed so solid…breaks,
For love so seldom bends.
Like little bits of paper
Torn and scattered on the sea
Two hearts destroyed
And loneliness…where love was supposed to be.

~*~

Some wonderful lines, Zippi. Welcome to Passions!

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2004-04-01 04:16 PM

O, Zippi… this is so sad. But in this vision I could see you standing out in the open, the wind blowing, and the little bits of paper scattering all over the place.
Such deep emotions you have… Beautiful emotions.
I hope you get happy, soon, and someday you find a true heart meant just for you.
Big hug from Texas!
JL

Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

4 posted 2004-04-01 04:21 PM

Hello my friend.
I knew you all were coming to visit these pages of blue.So happy to see you. The minute I seen your smiling faces and I began to cry. What a dope I am. If I could reach through space I would gather you all near and give you a great big hug.
The Three Musketeers of Friendship and one boy we are a draggin' by his feet cause he don't want to wear no fancy duds.
Hugs, hugs, hugs my dear, dear friends.
I do love you all.
Love Bon-Bon

Grover
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since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

5 posted 2004-04-01 05:36 PM

Off to a great start-- an excellent first post, shows great talent. Welcome to PIP!

ChemicalRepose
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since 2004-03-28

Posts 102

6 posted 2004-04-01 05:42 PM

Brought back some faded memories, I enjoyed reading this. Welcome to PIP.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2004-04-01 06:29 PM

quote:
All it takes is just a hint of lies
And a shadow of a doubt.

Welcome! zippi, I enjoyed this very much, and the 'bits of paper' metaphor. Profound truth in the line quoted above.

muted

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since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

8 posted 2004-04-01 06:32 PM

Welcome to Passions!

scatter those pieces, let them carry away the old...and then take a big breath in..and face the new.
very nice flow to this, nice to meet you

zippi
Member

since 2004-03-31

Posts 56
California

9 posted 2004-04-01 06:47 PM

Thanks everyone
So glad to be here, some truly wonderful poets at PIP. I'm having a blast reading and getting my first glimpse into your hearts.
Rene`

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

10 posted 2004-04-01 09:11 PM

Ah, Rene, so glad you got here (without decaf

)

You are certainly a welcome addition...glad to see your beautiful work...

Michael

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

11 posted 2004-04-01 09:20 PM

Enjoyed your first post!!

Darker Season
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 48
Wisconsin

12 posted 2004-04-01 09:21 PM

This was simply wonderful. I loved the emotion in this poem and some of the lines you came up with were brilliant. Almost made me jealous of your creativity. Keep up the good work...this is easily one of my favorites that I've read so far!

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

13 posted 2004-04-01 09:26 PM

Yep, you explained it so well...
SO well.
This really is a great piece.

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

14 posted 2004-04-02 02:17 AM

isn't that true! so true!

wonderful piece!

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

15 posted 2004-04-02 06:30 AM

Well my dear girl, Welcome to Passions, it is so good to have you here...This is so sad, so forlorned...so seeminly against life's loving clarity...and yet, reminds us of how we should marvel in today...bringing us happiness and savor each and every moment. Tremendous write...it's good to see ya sis...love ya bunches. Me

Kicking Kim
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since 2001-04-16

Posts 426
Cloud Cucko Land!

16 posted 2004-04-02 06:59 AM

A WARM WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!

What a wonderful first post too!

"All the dim and faded memories
vaguely flickering through the mind."
-Wonderful lines.

I'm sure you'll love it here at Passions as much as we all do.

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

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