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The Twiggy Twins
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The Twiggy Twins |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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Mary Joe and Jamie Lee were girls I'd known for years. Cool as shakes with lovely shapes that touted pouty rears. Their hair fell down in golden waves, their boobs superb displays until they went to model school and developed photo tastes Today I saw them on the street could not believe my eyes. Pure hard-body hotties once thin as two girl guides. Somehow they lost their buttocks; just my memory left behind. and what once filled thier upper cups, was just jello in my mind. (Chorus) Now they're in town again, two freakin twiggy twins Can't help but puzzle me.. They put the big bills from Grandma's will into the model agency. Flat front mammas with no more ta-ta's thinking the world agrees. They bet their money to be trendy bunnies with bony hips and knees Well I've looked over many ladies and I always found delight. When I considered them from head to toe and nature had built them right. With hips so round and normal and shapely legs for miles. If they rubbed against me I'd stagger around for a while. But they've lost color in their iris which was the deepest blue. A thousand traditions sacrificed to give their hair its hue. Supermodel cheekbones just skulls with sprayed on skin and now there's no more good parts, to hold and squeeze for men (Chorus) Now they're in town again, two freakin twiggy twins Can't help but puzzle me.. They put the big bills from Grandma's will into the model agency. Flat front mammas with no more ta-ta's thinking the world agrees. They bet their money to be trendy bunnies with bony hips and knees (Bridge) Now, I wouldn't buy a magazine to see those skeletal frauds. don't want no girls, a woman for me with some flesh to keep me warm. (Chorus) Now they're in town again, two freakin twiggy twins Can't help but puzzle me.. They put the big bills from Grandma's will into the model agency. Flat front mammas with no more ta-ta's thinking the world agrees. They bet their money to be trendy bunnies with bony hips and knees WELL THEY'RE NOT FOR ME!!!!!!!!!!!! Ain't doin nothin at all |
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dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
Too thin for you these days, huh? Nice poem! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ethome Good lyrics would love to hear the music. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Rockin & Roarin my dear man! So much truth in the baseline. TD |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Ding, Sy and TD I appreciate the read and the response. Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Ha, this is a fun write, would be a fun song to hear. ~K~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Actually, there's a lot of truth in this... which is the saddest part. Thank goodness for a man who likes a little flesh on her bones... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Eric It is a sad commentary on the way some woman feel they need to look to be attractive. I enjoyed this! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Ya just gotta have that cushion huh...never did see what guys saw in skinny. Great write my friend |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is aso true Eric...and sad. Some girls are starving themselves and thinking they look great. Good stuff! Hugs~ ~Before befriending butterflies |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you kahlil, Sunshine and Martie for taking the time to read and respond to this. I just see them as being real unhealthy specimens. Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Paula and Enchantress I thank you for the kind comments and the agreement. Much appreciated. Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Absolutely hilarious-- yet so very true!  |
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