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DuckieGurL
Junior Member

since 2004-04-01

Posts 15

0 posted 2004-04-01 05:15 AM

Oh, My Dear Baby, this is How I really Feel

I have uncertainties
about how I really feel.
It feels like I got pierced
in the heart
by an inhumane sharp dart.

And it goes deeper,
I feel the unseen pains more stronger.
Pains that no one would share nor care.
Perhaps, even sense.

Sometimes,
I have fears.
Unknown fears, even the fears
of being afraid.
Like a little growing deer
who’s unprepared to be troubled,
that will soon bawl in tear.

And now,
I live my life with hope.
That’s what I have been told
that
without hope
everything will be motionless.
Without hope,
I will rest in a peaceful dark hole,
but be tightened up
with stingy rope.

baby, baby
I have hope
and faith for both
of us who will soon enjoy
the sweet togetherness,
and live with joy.
forever, forever,...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-04-01 09:07 AM

Welcome to Passions.
I do hope you will enjoy your stay with us.
Please take the time to look around at all the forums.
Most of all relax and have fun.

Please check your email for a special greeting.

~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Before befriending butterflies
you have to meet with midnight moths.~

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2004-04-01 06:06 PM

Welcome to Passions. Hope you will enjoy the variety here, and the poetic lines in blue keep you'wrapped' up and inspired.

Darker Season
Junior Member

since 2004-04-01

Posts 48
Wisconsin

3 posted 2004-04-01 06:52 PM

Welcome, I just started here, too! So it's nice to see another newcomer around, especially with talent like you've shown here. Nice imagery and you put your emotions into words quite nicely.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2004-04-01 06:55 PM

Lovely...James

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

5 posted 2004-04-01 06:59 PM

A warm welcome... very nice first post. Look forward to reading more of your work!

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

6 posted 2004-04-02 05:25 PM

Excellent write. Penned with hope and love in your heart!
JL

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

7 posted 2004-04-02 05:31 PM

Welcome To Passions!
Enjoyed your first post.
Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

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