Open Poetry #31 |
A Story. |
exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
hello. this is a story about a girl. about a girl who loves a boy. nothing else. this is a story about a shadow. this is a story about music. about life. about love..... she'd kill for him. believe in me still... i'll always believe in you. always. sing me a song. any song. i don't care. as long as your singing it to me. i'm so sorry.. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
feeling some hurt in this one breathe in, breathe out...exhale |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
touching |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Straight from the heart! |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I think sometimes the strongest messages come in few words... and after hearing them a person is always left stunned, somewhat unsure that what they read could really touch as deep as it does. There's a strong message here... Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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