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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
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0 posted 2004-03-31 11:25 PM


hello.
this is a story about a girl.
about a girl who loves a boy.
nothing else.
this is a story about a shadow.
this is a story about music.
about life.
about love.....

she'd kill for him.

believe in me still...
i'll always believe in you.
always.
sing me a song.
any song.
i don't care.
as long as your singing it to me.

i'm so sorry..

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2004-04-01 12:14 PM


feeling some hurt in this one
breathe in, breathe out...exhale

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2004-04-01 01:58 AM


touching
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2004-04-01 06:38 PM


Nice writing...James
Grover
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4 posted 2004-04-01 07:45 PM


Straight from the heart!
GG
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Lost in thought
5 posted 2004-04-01 08:55 PM


I think sometimes the strongest messages come in few words... and after hearing them a person is always left stunned, somewhat unsure that what they read could really touch as deep as it does.
There's a strong message here...

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

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