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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2004-03-31 11:19 PM






Pure twilight’s purple
Pledging promises to come
Dreams sweet arrival




© Copyright 2004 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Suetang
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1 posted 2004-03-31 11:39 PM


So very beautiful, Karilea.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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2 posted 2004-04-01 12:12 PM


For some reason, this came to mind, not from the photo, but the words you wrote:

"and miles to go before I sleep"


beautiful senryu

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3 posted 2004-04-01 01:55 AM


beautiful
Margherita
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4 posted 2004-04-01 02:47 AM


Ahhhh yes dear Karilea! Wonderful words and those purple clouds are like angel wings beckoning and whispering "dreamland is ready to welcome you".
Charming!
Love, Margherita  

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5 posted 2004-04-01 03:49 PM


Oh so beautiful Karilea...so glad I didn't miss this one!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

  ~Before befriending butterflies
you have to meet with midnight moths.~

INclan
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6 posted 2004-04-01 03:59 PM


Very nice! Thank you for the read.
ethome
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7 posted 2004-04-01 04:02 PM


SIMPLY beautiful!

Eric

Spiros Zafiris
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8 posted 2004-04-01 04:56 PM


..Sunshine../\..indeed--so gentle--thanks..


..spiros


---------calm------

Grover
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9 posted 2004-04-01 05:02 PM


A beautiful image...
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10 posted 2004-04-01 05:11 PM


Very pretty, Karilea

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