Open Poetry #31 |
Oh to Those Eyes |
PassionatelyRomantic Member
since 2004-01-24
Posts 190 |
Oh to those eyes I do adore, that lie upon such fair a face; this heart can wish to do no more, but search for more a fairer place. Such magical realms they do conceive, that all eternity can lie in their depth, but oh such magical eyes do but theive; hearts by lying, in too false a death. How radiant they are to love to this, that the night, to them, is merely prey; for so less a passion is found in kiss, yet so much more is found in display. These eyes do shame those summer skies, that shine so brightly, to outdo love; for unto them, such heated passion lies- and so much more, these eyes do move. For such beauty this heart does long, believing it may exist in more fairer place, but to that, this heart did but wrong, for no fairer a place is thy loving face! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Wow, Jared!! You certainly live up to your name. Beautiful words of love and romance that were so much enjoyed. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sweetly romantic...with an old fashioned flavor. Enjoyed! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jared~ Oh yes ... this is the old fashioned romantic thoughts at play~ BEAUTIFUL !!! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
always romantic |
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