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gemjop
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0 posted 2004-03-31 03:08 PM



I know her,

she meets me in the road at night

like the permanent fixtures of my palm

a dainty crease

among such a callous skin-scape.


I know her name

like she knows my skin by moonlight

or eclipse

a fever of shallow breath

upon my stones.

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1 posted 2004-03-31 03:17 PM


Man I love how you write!
Welcome back!! hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

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2 posted 2004-03-31 03:21 PM


Yeah Gem, so  do I. Nice to read you again. WB!

Maree

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

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3 posted 2004-03-31 03:27 PM


Welcome back Gem!
Good to read you again.
Hugs~

  ~Before befriending butterflies
you have to meet with midnight moths.~

Sunshine
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4 posted 2004-03-31 03:30 PM



I've missed your writing, Gemma.  
Welcome home.

Aenimal
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5 posted 2004-03-31 03:36 PM


like i said , i really looo..lloo..I adore this one. Open to different readings
Earth Angel
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6 posted 2004-03-31 04:25 PM


Well bless your sweet soul! Gem Drop, you're back! I was just thinking about you yesterday, and here you are before me with your smiling face and your unique and special poetry!

Love ya!
Lindy Lou

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7 posted 2004-03-31 10:10 PM


I know her name

like she knows my skin by moonlight

or eclipse

a fever of shallow breath

upon my stones.

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this part stirs emotions inside ..ahhhh

.......
JDW III

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8 posted 2004-03-31 11:46 PM


Talk about a wonderful treat! GEMMA!
I have really, really missed your writing. And this new one is as sparkling as the others I remember.

dingusjr
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9 posted 2004-04-01 01:46 AM


Oooooo...WOW!  This is VERY good!  Thanks.
passing shadows
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10 posted 2004-04-01 01:52 AM


you've been missed
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11 posted 2004-04-01 12:53 PM


LilGemma~
So nice to read you again~

Lovely piece dear~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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LeeJ
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12 posted 2004-04-01 02:15 PM


Gem, hiya how are you doing, well by this write, I can see your shining brightly as ever.  Lovely write
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13 posted 2004-04-01 02:18 PM


oh my, you've made an instant fan out of me!
Toerag
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14 posted 2004-04-01 02:29 PM


This was very interesting and could be "read" in many different ways.well done..Do you know what "Toad in the hole" is?

[This message has been edited by Toerag (04-01-2004 03:43 PM).]

gemjop
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15 posted 2004-04-02 04:14 PM


Thanks all for the lovely welcome back. Its really great to 'see' you all again. Hugs to you all.

Toe, ha, yes I do. ever tried it? I haven't had that since i was little!

I might invent a new recipe, Toe in the hole!

Susan Caldwell
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16 posted 2004-04-05 01:40 PM


LMAO "Toe in the hole"  now that just didn't sound right!!!

It makes me happy to be able to read you again!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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