Open Poetry #31 |
Shade |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Shade The tomb of dark harvests shade Like perfume from a forest glade It runs the baste from eye to lung And leaves a taste upon the tongue It weighs upon the gray of mind Loosens up the play of bind Accentuates the stay of fall Fixing all within the sprawl Shade will mimic every move Vest itself in every groove Endemic to the quick of eye And has the trick to multiply It stays with us a friend or tool Large of wend or minuscule And though it’s weightless to the feel Its way with us is very real Shade to me is yin of yang and Umbilical from which we hang. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Much enjoyed this morning's write Sy. believe in what your heart feels... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I find this morning lesson of yours very precious in your vast understanding of the way of life, and for each individual it is different depending on that person's needs for what they must accomplish with their lives. Which also brings to mind, the more one fights that way, sidetracked by the little evil voice of sprites...hehehehe, the more difficult the journey, and perhaps that is why Jesus weather the son of God or not, so found it necessary to warn, do not be tempted by the needs and wants of the flesh, and ways of the world. It is a wondrous journey not being a follower, but more so, trying to follow the spiritual way, whilst still weighing the ways, and beliefs of others...your writes are truly inspiring. Thank you and Good morning. Smiles and hugs |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful morning write Sy! Very much enjoyed the read. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~Before befriending butterflies |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
SO nice to be back and to find such wisdom spoken beautifully...I really enjoy the internal rhymes you have concocted so well...~P |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio Much enjoyed your reply. LeeJ Always delighted with your read and reply. Nancy, Thank you dear, choshi A delightful comment, thank you. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Mr. T.! When you add equal parts of yin and yang, you end up with a shade of gray! Gray can be very calming to ones emotions! ~ especially if one were to be hung upside down from an umbilical cord! lol Tie a knot onto the end of that cord and hang on! lol EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Mr. T.! When you add equal parts of yin and yang, you end up with a shade of gray! Gray can be very calming to one's emotions! ~ especially if one were to be hung upside down from an umbilical cord! lol Tie a knot onto the end of that cord and hang on! lol EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good Morning, Mr. T.! When yin is added to yang, a shade of gray is born! Gray can be very soothing and would be helpful in calming your nerves if you were to hang upside down from an ambilical cord! Tie a knot at the end of that cord and hang on! lol EA |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
See how you excite the readers? Good morning, Sy! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, my goodness! It would appear as tho' this "angel" likes to repeat herself! I had difficulty posting my replies and then when I'd go back into your poem to see if any of my replies showed up, they hadn't! ~ so I posted again and again... lol EA |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sy, good morning! How I love your writes and wisdom. Thank you for all you share with us. Huggles, Marti |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
another awesome write! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel, Point well taken three times. LOL Sunshine Yes, Marti, It is my pleasure. passing, Thank you love. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Another great write Sy! Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
It runs the baste from eye to lung And leaves a taste upon the tongue Accentuates the stay of fall Fixing all within the sprawl Shade will mimic every move Vest itself in every groove Endemic to the quick of eye And has the trick to multiply =============================== How am I supposed to pick fave lines when you have SO MANY COOL COUPLETS!!! You know I am loving this one...you got down with the get down and did it to it in rhyme *L* Shade to me is yin of yang and Umbilical from which we hang. and I hang on your every word!!! ( and winkie) lol *ww* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ethome Thank you my friend. JM, Your threads to me to cool to spool They wed my mind and make me droole They oscillate around my words And turn them into hummming birds. WWRS |
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