Open Poetry #31 |
While Eating Tacos At The Mall |
dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
She sits at a table facing me, Short skirt and long, lovely legs crossed. Man, I'm too old for this..... Her skirt hikes up beyond reason, A heel dangles from one foot... And it's not me. Don't stare Don't stare.... As if I could stop. She smiles at me sensing my discomfort. I can't stop looking Any more than she. It's true... A man can't stop looking Till they close the lid. Hell, I'll probably take a peek Even then. [This message has been edited by dingusjr (03-28-2004 08:35 AM).] |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Yes, lust of the flesh is often a man's demise. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Try always to leave them with a smile. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
enjoyed |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I certainly HOPE so! Enjoyed the ending, Larry. It left a HUGE smile! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, saucy tacos, heh? |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
haha, good one! ~K~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Larry~ *smiling* ... *smiling* *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
We'd be awfully disappointed if you stopped looking. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
lol |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
hehe enjoyed Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
You a naughty man dingus, a naughty man .... too! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Interesting angle for a write and a good one! Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hehehehe...enjoyed this |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
ROFL... that's why you have eyes, right? *G* To appreciate the scenery? LOL I enjoyed this! *S* |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
LOL |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
The saying goes...... "You can look but don't touch." Then you won't wind up with a black eye from your wife. LOL Bon |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Sounds like that little taco gave you your money's worth and more -- but watch the hot sauce, eh? |
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