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dingusjr
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0 posted 2004-03-27 10:10 PM



She sits at a table facing me,
Short skirt and long, lovely legs crossed.
Man, I'm too old for this.....

Her skirt hikes up beyond reason,
A heel dangles from one foot...
And it's not me.

Don't stare
Don't stare....
As if I could stop.

She smiles at me
sensing my discomfort.
I can't stop looking
Any more than she.

It's true...
A man can't stop looking
Till they close the lid.
Hell, I'll probably take a peek
Even then.

[This message has been edited by dingusjr (03-28-2004 08:35 AM).]

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Grover
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1 posted 2004-03-27 10:14 PM


Yes, lust of the flesh is often a man's demise.
icebox
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2 posted 2004-03-27 10:34 PM


Try always to leave them with a smile.
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3 posted 2004-03-27 11:41 PM


enjoyed
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4 posted 2004-03-28 11:23 AM



  I certainly HOPE so!  Enjoyed the ending, Larry.  It left a HUGE smile!

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5 posted 2004-03-28 11:25 AM


LOL, saucy tacos, heh?
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6 posted 2004-03-28 11:56 AM


haha, good one!  ~K~
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7 posted 2004-03-28 05:56 PM


Larry~
*smiling* ... *smiling*
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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8 posted 2004-03-28 08:30 PM


We'd be awfully disappointed if you stopped looking.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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9 posted 2004-03-30 11:51 PM


lol
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10 posted 2004-03-30 11:53 PM


hehe enjoyed

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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11 posted 2004-03-31 12:31 PM


You a naughty man dingus, a naughty man .... too!

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ethome
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12 posted 2004-03-31 01:27 AM


Interesting angle for a write and a good one!

Eric

Ain't doin nothin at all
Just answerin the call
Kinda driftin away from it all~~~~~

passing shadows
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13 posted 2004-03-31 03:43 AM


hehehehe...enjoyed this
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14 posted 2004-03-31 12:53 PM


ROFL... that's why you have eyes, right? *G* To appreciate the scenery? LOL I enjoyed this! *S*
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15 posted 2004-03-31 12:59 PM


LOL
Bonnie j
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16 posted 2004-03-31 05:14 PM


The saying goes......
"You can look but don't touch."
Then you won't wind up with a black eye from your wife. LOL
Bon

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17 posted 2004-03-31 07:28 PM


Sounds like that little taco gave you your money's worth and more -- but watch the hot sauce, eh?



~~J

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