Open Poetry #31 |
Within the Morning Mists |
Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
So small of droplets, Blurring my window vision, With moaning silence As splashing steps carry on Notice no water Upon ground or falling from sky, Damp sorrows of soul and eye. Gloom |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Gives me shivers and makes me sigh. Great write! Love, Margherita |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wonderful metaphors, sir... you place the reader inside your soul... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
melancholic...perfectly "gloom"y |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
kind of reminds me of a ghost story (don't ask me why) LOL wonderfully, gloomy, write |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh! Goodness this one hit me in the heart it did. Prof. this one is going into my library! hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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