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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2004-03-30 11:11 PM



whisper to me sweet nothings
make me feel real again
make this ever lasting
pain come to an end

in the morning when i wake
take me in your arms and take
me into your world of dreamy
days of sunshine and rainbows

clouds of thunder rain
and windo caos that is
building is that isnt the
life i wish to stay in

the finger tips of the
days of the way you were
with me. the way you used
to kiss me i am no longer
here in your heart i am the
furtherest thing

the heart of hearts
bleeds once more
the slamming of the
door the locked up
broken dreams are
placed back into the
old cedar trunk

Unedited

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2004-03-31 02:43 AM


Melancholy but nicely expressed.

Eric

Foxyoasis
Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
2 posted 2004-03-31 02:44 AM


ty

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2004-03-31 03:20 AM


bittersweet...good piece
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