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Of bottles and parchment
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Of bottles and parchment |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn 
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Continuing these thoughts /pip/Forum88/HTML/002903.html When I determine what it is that needs to be written it would deserve to be put on appropriate paper A heavy linen stock made from threads that I’ve plucked from my past Or the old denim shirt a girl once wore to seduce me And what of the bottle wouldn’t it too, need to be special? An “empty” befitting its status as envoy Made from dark glass to protect ink from the light Perhaps the dark green of Cliquot’s “Grand Dame” or the amber that held a Cent Cinquatenaire Which color of wax and which point of departure will all need addressing when the time comes But, the real problem for me with sending missives in glass ships isn’t so much, that they would never be found rather, that they just might be [This message has been edited by wranx (03-31-2004 09:23 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
wranx Loved the metaphors enjoyed the read. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
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But, the real problem for me with sending missives in glass ships isn’t so much, that they would never be found rather, that they just might be Thoughts to ponder. ENJOYED this. Sadie |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
well, some of us are standing around at water's edge waiting for that very bottle  bon noir, mon ami |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
always making me think |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Only a "Special Reserve" Bottle would do ... The real kick is that now thoughts travel beautifully on their own and touch who is ready to receive them. hmmmm .... you have me thinking. Love, Margherita  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed Enjoyed, as always, the way your mind works.  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
sending this up on an AM wave |
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