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muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

0 posted 2004-03-30 12:25 PM

Desert(ed)
~*~
(a Nonet)
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How far can I drive into the sand
on half-a-tank of gas fuming?
A mirage in poloroid
of emotion captured,
instant clarity
to answer why
the cactus
won't cry
here.

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

1 posted 2004-03-30 01:13 PM

A profound image here.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2004-03-30 02:23 PM

Very well done. hugs, Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

Christopher

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

3 posted 2004-03-30 02:51 PM

quote:
to answer why
the cactus
won't cry
here.

...cool

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-03-30 02:53 PM

Excellent Dawn!
Love this form.
Hugs~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace ~

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

5 posted 2004-03-30 04:39 PM

I especially love this...

to answer why
the cactus
won't cry
here.

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

6 posted 2004-03-30 04:40 PM

This is a simple form, but you get something profound from it. Well done.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

7 posted 2004-03-30 04:42 PM

Very well done...Clever.

Eric

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2004-03-30 04:43 PM

Clever!

Love, Margherita

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

9 posted 2004-03-31 08:26 AM

Very good and cleer writing Dawn...i liked it..

Thank you...Goldenrose....

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

10 posted 2004-03-31 09:27 AM

How far can I drive into the sand
on half-a-tank of gas fuming?
A mirage in poloroid
of emotion captured,
instant clarity
to answer why
the cactus
won't cry
here.

SO great to be back and to find your amazing poem. You have pulled so much image and feeling..great!

~P

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2004-03-31 12:42 PM

as always...excellent!

Jeffrey Carter

Member Elite

since 2000-04-08

Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!

12 posted 2004-03-31 01:04 PM

so few words can say oh so much .... amazing

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