Open Poetry #31 |
Its Quite Obvious You Knew |
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Its Quite Obvious You Knew Whatever was on my mind Everything was displayed Always given you access Where you happily played My heart loyal and sincere Nothing was ever denied As I passed it over to you With full contents supplied You made me feel special As you claimed my mind Never needing to search My feelings you could find Coaxed me out of my shell You found my tenderness There is much to be said About your skillful prowess Tugging at my heartstrings Playing as feelings grew Toying with my emotions Its quite obvious you knew Hope ©2004 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
HopeS Good thoughts, good write, good read. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very much enjoyed the read Hope. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
mmmm...sounded like a great romance until i read the word "toyed"...toying with someone's emotions is not good at all! Im hoping this was a happy ending after all |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Seymour thanks ever so much for your kind reply Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Hey Nancy , I am so pleased you enjoyed and your reply was much appreciated Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks Dawn , well he did romaced my mind , happy ending , it difficult to tell , do those type ever say farewell ?? Hope |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hang in there |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You speak in the past tense, dear Hope, and this makes me think of a change ... It's so beautiful to say "I give you my heart", but no one must look at it as a toy. Very well expressed. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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