Open Poetry #31 |
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ChemicalRepose Member
since 2004-03-28
Posts 102 |
Shivering, trembling Hindering this sensation They wave and shroud the ground around us Inclining walls of water touch the sky stagnant in these motionless tides Infinite horizons defying Open yourself to this desire and deviate this penetration Another bubble dances forward every particle glancing, humbled caressing this embodied decadence Now diluted in foam and the deceiving devotion quivers her vagary Let me show you divinity I will let you float and show you my prowl ghosts awaken to inverse you and submerge you in infidelity Black curtains ripple across the sky now unburdened she opens wide consuming the owl bringing an end to this suspended time The drum sounds and all comes crashing down the wave pummels her weakness |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Infidelity is a cruel and hard reality sometimes. Rage boils beneath your words, as if they must reach surface for air, or drown the victim. Your poetry is intense and full of emotions, well conveyed. Harsh on the tender eyes. TD |
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