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ChemicalRepose
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since 2004-03-28
Posts 102


0 posted 2004-03-29 09:05 PM


Shivering, trembling
Hindering
this sensation

They wave and shroud
the ground around us
Inclining walls of water touch the sky
stagnant in these motionless tides
Infinite horizons
defying
Open yourself to this
desire
and deviate this penetration

Another bubble dances forward
every particle
glancing, humbled
caressing this embodied decadence
Now diluted in foam
and the deceiving devotion
quivers her vagary
Let me show you divinity

I will let you float
and show you my prowl
ghosts awaken
to inverse you
and submerge you
in
infidelity

Black curtains ripple across the sky
now unburdened she opens wide
consuming the owl
bringing an end to this suspended time
The drum sounds
and all comes crashing down
the wave pummels her weakness

© Copyright 2004 Ben - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2004-03-29 10:33 PM


Infidelity is a cruel and hard reality sometimes.  Rage boils beneath your words, as if they must reach surface for air, or drown the victim.
Your poetry is intense and full of emotions, well conveyed.  Harsh on the tender eyes.
TD

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