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Simple words spoken to my love
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Simple words spoken to my love |
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misao Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 50 |
For all these years our friendship stayed I want to love you for you to make my heart never fade Simple words youve spoken to me talking about the past the way it used to be and all this time ive expressed my love in a little rhyme Never so I want to see tearful eyes full of sadness and misery for me to see you hurt like this is ripping me apart so please dont cry please dont..... |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Simply wonderful words! Richy |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
misao This was a lovely piece of writing. Thank you for sharing. Take care......Sue I am in motion I am blue Love is an ocean I'm anchored in you - Shawn Mullins |
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misao Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 50 |
You forgot to log out again sweetie. shaking my head... you truly are my mini-me...  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Now...where was I? oh yes, I was smiling. First I discover my daughter is a poet, and now I discover my daughter is a poet in love. I am very proud of you, but also a little afraid for you. But then, although you are like me, you're also the newer improved version--grin, and I know I don't have a thing to worry about.  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The newer improved version of your Mother, now that is a very good thing.  Loved your poem misao~ I know the feeling when we want so badly to ease another persons pain...it's a double edged sword for sure. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Hi, Misao... You've expressed some feelings here that I think we can all relate to at some point in our lives... and you've expressed them very well... I enjoyed reading this, and I'll be looking forward to seeing more from you... and?...smiling here... TWO Serenitys?... now what could be better than that?... smile Hugs to BOTH of you...  "When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace." --Jimi Hendrix |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! Two Serenitys! (does happy dance) Awwwwwwww, this is wonderful, sweet friend, you speak with a most honest and compassionate heart, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Heartfelt... very good job! Grover. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky...nice writing...James |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Enjoyed these simple heartfelt words.  |
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misao Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 50 |
Thank you all so much! These comments brighten up my day and enlighten my soul.  |
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