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Of Kingdoms
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Of Kingdoms |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Of Kingdoms The kingdom of my psyche’s let Ties a Gordian knot of set It shawls my shoulders and my thigh’s Knotted well in truth and lies. It warms the flesh upon my bones Inscriptions set on aging stones Underneath a rivers flume That will not let the moss to bloom It chooses paths for me to roam Sails my ship through spray and foam Draws a curtain to a stage To read the words upon its page And I a puppet tied with strings Obey the law of primal things Speak upon a wind of draft That sounds to me of hollow shaft I would the puppeteer appear But he’s too busy in the rear |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Naw he's not back there becauase there's no puppet that can write great poetry like this.....However, we are all immersed in our own personal kingdoms. Like Bob Dylan said, "you've got to serve somebody" Good write Sy! Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
Very nice notions in this poem. I like the ideas which you have used!! ^*Wonderful read*^ ^*-Kimberley-*^  "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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zippi Member
since 2004-03-31
Posts 56California |
So lightly written, such a deep, insightful message. I really loved this one. Right up my alley! Rene` |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good morning Seymour...I'm up early today and glad to read you here |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I'm running out the door this morn Sy-babers, but couldnt leave with out getting my winkies and leaving you and Randy some sugar and spice. LOL *ww*     |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
It chooses paths for me to roam Sails my ship through spray and foam Draws a curtain to a stage To read the words upon its page oh but what subbmissive puppets we are Brilliant write again and again How I love reading you...very pretty! Morning Sy, Happy Friday |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful morning write Sy m'friend. Very insightful with a great message. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~Before befriending butterflies |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Sir T! Well, I'm going to go really deep with my interpretation of this illustrious write. It is about you wrapped in a shawl being jerked about by puppet strings! lol Love you! EA |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A thought stirring poem this morning, Sy. But then you have a talent for such writings. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Put down the drawbridge, Sy, I'm coming over...  Good morning! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ethome Enjoyed your comment, thank you. Kim Thank you for the wonderful read. zippi May the light of ages light your alley. JM, Sugar and spice and everything nice. WWRS LeeJ And the happiest of fridays to you. Nancy, Hold the tea, I'll be right there. passing, Glad to see you up and reading. Hugs |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Shucks, I thought no one would understand. But then again you are my earth angel. scorpio Enjoyed your reply, thank you. Sunshine The drawbridge is always open for you. |
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