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Swan Song In A Silent Movie
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Swan Song In A Silent Movie |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Swan Song In A Silent Movie By: Noah Eaton 3/27/04 (intro chord progression) (riff 1: throughout verses) I can't read your lips, there's just too much I miss, each reminisce leaves me transfixed. I screamed from the top of my lungs every night, dreaming that you'd return before my very eyes now here you are, but it don't feel right (riff 2: throughout pre-chorus) I'm ashamed to admit, you'd look more beautiful to me, like a priceless child, in a classic silent movie, when you walked around me, whispering terms of endearment into my ear, it's scary when you always listen, but you just can't hear... (chorus: chord progression) You break my heart, when I hear you sing, when I hear you sing... YOU KNOW HOW IT MAKES ME DIZZY... (riff 1: verse) Burning the midnight oil, wrapping my heart in aluminum foil, preserving the freshness of you where it recoils. (riff 2: pre-chorus) I'm in a state of hebephrenia, I'm locked in my own recovery room, lethargy invades my dreams, since we bid adieu, I want to send the memory away from whence it came, but I'm grateful by getting to feel you, your self-portrait stole my heart, just a moment too soon... (chorus: chord progression) You break my heart, when I hear you sing, when I hear you sing... YOU KNOW HOW IT MAKES ME DIZZY... (bridge: solo) (chorus: chord progression) You break my heart, when I hear you sing, when I hear you sing... YOU KNOW HOW IT MAKES ME DIZZY... (coda: continuing chords) "You'll find something that's enough to keep you But if the bright lights don't receive you You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20 |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
You've done it again, Noah... excellent write, romantic and warm!  |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
you break my heart when i hear you sing boy do i know that feeling  this was good as all you do beautiful  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
So, Noah, when are you going to let us listen to your music?? I'd like to hear this swan song again with your guitar.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
You really should have a concert in your living room and invite us to come over |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
I'd buy tickets to that  again noah, a very sweet write |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Noah...I'd love to hear it too...although it's always good to just read you. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Noah, your Swan Song is beautifully melancholic. Your heart is in the healing process. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"I'm locked in my own recovery room," ~ Wow, after all that I have just gone through, that line really hits home! Fortunately I found the key and I'm out of there and almost fully recovered! Someday I hope to hear your sweet voice singing your wonderful songs!  Loves 'n hugs, EA |
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