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ThunderMage
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0 posted 2004-03-28 08:34 PM


Their party came to the inn that night,
Hungry, tired, and cold;
They carried weapons to fit the day,
Tools of new or old.

The warrior stood o'er six feet high,
His tiny body looked so frail,
But when he drew his sword in battle,
Ne'er would his courage fail.

The thief stood only an inch or two short
Of meeting the warrior's face,
But when retreat was necessary, none e'er were better,
Nor had they such speed in the race.

The healer seemed frightened of darkness below,
Afraid of the monster within;
The beast had already devoured some souls,
The battle the healer can't win.

The wizard's height matched the warrior's noble stride,
His wisdom and knowledge so vast;
Within the others' minds he'd seen,
Their tales of the past.

The warrior spoke to the innkeeper:
"Where might I find Heaven's Door?"
The innkeeper said, "Simply look in your heart,
And from that point, you need journey no more."

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

© Copyright 2004 Liam Hall - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-03-28 08:39 PM


i really liked this  very powerful


            


the_loner_23
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2 posted 2004-03-29 12:12 PM


Yes a truly powerful poem this is.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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3 posted 2004-03-29 01:07 AM


i must say .. that not being a fan of rhyme...you held my attention.. that's saying a lot!!

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

iliana
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4 posted 2004-03-29 02:29 AM


The greatest of stories retold so well!  
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