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ChemicalRepose
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since 2004-03-28

Posts 102

0 posted 2004-03-28 04:04 PM

My screams release, from beneath this cavern.
Surrounding mountains, deceiving, my eyes fill with passion, but
I can't sit here alone, not for too long.
Kneeling, silent, broken, and vibrant, waiting for this sky to fall,
to fill this chasm, So I can cross, and be reborn.

I'm weak, and survive only because you tell me to.
I can feel your presence, landing in my thoughts.
I've been drained, so feed me some more silence.
I am too weak and scared to find solace without you,
and I am prepared to follow you.

God won't you silence me, and eliminate these dissident thoughts, they keep stalking me.
Speak, and free my defiance, open and consume my suspicion.
Feed my weak, diseased beliefs.

Thoughts are broken now, and I'm choking on my competence
and waiting for your guidance.
Don't let your light miss me
Let me concede, these beliefs I need.
As I plant this seed, to grow, you lead,
and relieve me, their masquerade? I believe.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2004-03-28 04:15 PM

Welcome to Passions.
Sounds like quite a battle going on, lots of intensity in the imagery.
Hope you stay and enjoy all the variety Passions has to offer.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-03-28 04:33 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Take a look around at all our forums
and most of all enjoy your stay!
I look forward to seeing more of your work.

Please check your email for a special greeting.

~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace ~

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

3 posted 2004-03-28 04:36 PM

Good first post... loads of creative energy here, great imagery, metaphors. Welcome to Passions! Grover.

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

4 posted 2004-03-28 04:39 PM

CR: this is intense and filled with turmoil. Lots I can identify with here. Welcome to Passions!!!
I'm looking forward to more of your writings and hope you will enjoy cruising around and having a look at all the artistry here.
~K~

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

5 posted 2004-03-28 04:42 PM

P.S. do I know you??

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

6 posted 2004-03-28 04:42 PM

Welcome to Passions
bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

ChemicalRepose
Member

since 2004-03-28

Posts 102

7 posted 2004-03-28 05:04 PM

I dont believe I know you, but maybe. Whats your name? And where are you from? I'm Ben and from New York.

Thank all of you for the positive comments. I hope all of you enjoy my other writings.

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

8 posted 2004-03-28 05:22 PM

welcome to the passion

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2004-03-28 05:31 PM

Welcome to Passions!

Make yourself at home!

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

10 posted 2004-03-28 05:50 PM

CR

Welcome to Passions. I enjoyed reading your first post and look forward to more.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

11 posted 2004-03-28 06:18 PM

Ben~
Welcome to Passions~

This is a wonderfully intense entry into this circle of poets and friends~

I look forward to more~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

[email protected]

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

12 posted 2004-03-28 06:25 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS
ENJOYED YOUR FIRST POST
HUGS, CHRIS

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

13 posted 2004-03-28 09:09 PM

this one runs deep into the painful places, hoping you find solace

and Welcome to Passions

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

14 posted 2004-03-28 09:43 PM

interesting first post...welcome to passions.

ChemicalRepose
Member

since 2004-03-28

Posts 102

15 posted 2004-03-28 09:45 PM

What does the opening folder by my post mean?

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

16 posted 2004-03-28 09:53 PM

That it is your first orignal post, please read your email.

bernie

``

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

ChemicalRepose
Member

since 2004-03-28

Posts 102

17 posted 2004-03-28 10:00 PM

ahhh, thanks

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

18 posted 2004-03-28 11:01 PM

i too must welcome you to passions

felt alot of pain and turmoil here. i totally understand. i live with a person who lives in the land of denial. it hurts to see the way he decieves himself

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

19 posted 2004-03-29 03:12 AM

Intense writing! Welcome to Passions, ChemicalRepose. Sometimes I scream so loud I can't hear the answer....but it's there, somewhere, I believe.

nn
Member

since 2000-09-18

Posts 75

20 posted 2004-03-29 02:40 PM

What a nice poem. Liked it very much

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

21 posted 2004-03-29 02:47 PM

Welcome to Passions. There are a lot of good people here and talent. One can easily get hooked on writing here. I hope you enjoy. I could tell your heart was in your first post. Take care,
Sadie (Sadelite)

nn
Member

since 2000-09-18

Posts 75

22 posted 2004-03-29 02:49 PM

What a very nice poem. Liked it very much

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