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0 posted 2004-03-28 10:40 AM




With a proud stance
and a regal face
surrounded by a jostled mane
ready to set his claim
he leads a entourage of ladies
all on his domain
they search to feed
and keep his needs
nestled in a group called pride
from their prey they hide.
It’s difficult to compete
with agile youngsters quick on their feet,
yet after a day's hard conquest
they settle at what they do best...
On the hard savannah floor
where in the wild there are no mores,
they writhe and tousle on the scrub...
next to a massage, comes a nice back rub


© Copyright 2004 Martin Dansky - All Rights Reserved
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We are talking about the Lion
or maybe man(me).....
enjoyed....

bernie

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2 posted 2004-03-28 11:41 AM


Gotta be man...
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4 posted 2004-03-28 01:05 PM


Well done Martin...much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
   Has held me in the same embrace ~

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5 posted 2004-03-28 01:44 PM


wonderful write! I enjoyed the read
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6 posted 2004-03-28 02:48 PM


man can be a beast   enjoyed this

thanks for sharing


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7 posted 2004-03-29 01:32 AM


Could be man, but it wasn't meant to be...


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