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brian madden
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0 posted 2004-03-28 08:56 AM





We follow through until the end even though we know

Its predictable cry, slight tremor ache of guilt another

precious ideology split, laid to waste. It was the Howl of the Beat generation,

their currency in the markets of heroin and heroes. Taken in mono et man o' man.

Made even sweeter by the Leviticus ban,

though did they deny man from lying down with himself? Was that a sub section,

Rule 43, sub section paragraph 3…. No pleasure in any form to be taken from yourself,

Foot note: "such" acts are known to cause spiritual and physical blindness.

And I kneel and pray, kneel and pray in the futility of salvation, I'll save myself, at least I will be judged fairly by myself.

"Aboard a shipwreck train, give my umbrella to the rain dogs For I am a rain dog, too" Tom Waits



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1 posted 2004-03-28 09:12 AM


BRIAN!  Welcome home!
Please...stay awhile!!!

and this?

And I kneel and pray, kneel and pray in the futility of salvation, I'll save myself, at least I will be judged fairly by myself.

Could one ask for anything more?

Now...write me another!

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2 posted 2004-03-28 10:57 AM


Welcome Home! Youve been missed by sooo many..

i had to ask google to help me with "Leviticus" because i dont know much about such things...
but i think ive got the gist
and again i learn something

Hope you stay and amaze us more

Grover
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3 posted 2004-03-28 11:46 AM


We do have the power to choose, but God is the ultimate judge.
Martie
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4 posted 2004-03-28 12:20 PM


brian!!!



I am so glad to see you...and deep reaches of your thought!!

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5 posted 2004-03-28 01:12 PM


enjoyed this bit of ban
good to read your unique writes again

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6 posted 2004-03-28 01:43 PM


welcome home indeed
Dark Angel
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7 posted 2004-03-28 03:25 PM


Fabulous Brian,it's great to see you here and read you again.

Yes please stay awhile  

Maree.


Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (03-30-2004 07:37 AM).]

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8 posted 2004-03-29 11:52 PM


Bravo Brian..classy
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9 posted 2004-03-30 06:53 PM


Nice writing...James
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