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Slipped
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Slipped I’ve slipped into the dark abyss Into the sea of reminisce Where lights fly in winks of sigh To form a teardrop on the eye It hides within the daily trail Weather you walk or try to sail A quicksand on the way of day It grabs you in its mental play It sails you to the catacombs Where lay the mold and dusty bones And sweeps you into past events Where you are caught without a vent For sorrow ties a string of thought Attached to every dish you caught That plays you like a puppeteer Upon the stage of inner fear For that’s the way of when and men Until you’re washed to shore again |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I’ve slipped into the dark abyss Into the sea of reminisce Where lights fly in winks of sigh To form a teardrop on the eye ~*~ Don't you dare stop winking... none of us want to fall! A sad write, Sy...let' see if we can give you something to smile about today!   |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine When the wind takes you, you never know where you will go. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
I enjoyed this very much, thank you Seymour for sharing your words here, appreciated my friend. Much emotion and truths surround this one. Sincerely Rick |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rick Thank you Rick, enjoyed your comment. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Much enjoyed the read this morn Sy! How about a cup of Chai tea to brighten up this day? ~Mornings hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Chai tea would be fine. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ No matter where the breeze-of-thought carries you ... you always end up poetically perfect~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
for that's the way of when and men taking you to the shore again i enjoyed this truthfull write.  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Seymour, it's so good to read you.  Hugs Ethel |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
So that's how it is for men, huh? Sy, I'm drilling a vent hole right here for you. O <<<<------- vent hole Now, breath . . . the oxygen should be arriving any second! lol -- don't be blue too long (even though I like your moody poem very much). |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 sigh |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, You are a sweet heart. MGROVES Thank you so much. Ethel, Thank you dear. iliana You are a life saver. passing, Thank you, |
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