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The sleepless seed of Aphrodite (Lighthouse Series Scene 6)
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The sleepless seed of Aphrodite (Lighthouse Series Scene 6) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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lighthouse you stand proud over earth as if to grow old you have heard many a cry from the pointy jaws of your sea Five Islands harbour you you dream of endless mirrors and fresh window panes to make ready for the night you seducer of trousers and petticoats you stare soundlessly into cobalt light reaping the throb of genitalia the sleepless seed of Aphrodite the night is gothic and it takes off all her clothes she is black eyed full of fish and plays with the hem of your surround luring you to life Angel of Darkness March 28 2004 Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Awesome descriptions!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
dang! that is cool! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
"the night is gothic and it takes off all her clothes she is black eyed full of fish and plays with the hem of your surround luring you to life" AWESOME images  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The Fates are smiling with wicked delight... in the background of my small office, I had on some Celtic Myst music, and the Song of Solomon was playing, complete with ocean surf... so the read was more than delightful...it was a true experience! Thank you, little one. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Whew.... a beacon like this one will most assuredly bring a ship into the harbor....here comes one now! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
You, Darksis, are filled with gothic image and play subtle with the hem of our imagination. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maree....Wow! Fabulous use of mood words! Love this, and you! |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Exceptional talent! |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Wow, I love the images in this! "the night is gothic and it takes off all her clothes she is black eyed full of fish and plays with the hem of your surround luring you to life" Fabulous! ~K~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thank you all.. you are all so kind and make humble this complicated creature heh  Martie? loveutoo Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 this is fantastic, loved the imagery, the sensual feel of this unusual lighthouse scene |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
The images flood in and fill me with wonder and I think, I know her. How privileged am I? Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
oh my , i liked your others in this series but this one takes the cake lol it has history , it has magic , and it has a warm throb of passion ...simply amazing m smiles for you -wolfy ....... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I still say you're one of the sexiest poets at Pip, and this just proves it... again, with the haunting sensuality. mmm. mm. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you stare soundlessly into cobalt light reaping the throb of genitalia the sleepless seed of Aphrodite the night is gothic and it takes off all her clothes ================================== whoa and whew....ya got some awesome lines and images in this girlie.... and I am loving the personifi of this line: and plays with the hem of your surround very, very, cool write Poetess Maree. Home is a feeling I buried in you ... |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
some very cool images in this Mmy-- will try to come back later for another read-- one of those willing spirit but tired body things--lol hugs dear j There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
You know I lvd this bella, why do you know this? Because i already told you i did Dori..yeesh grins |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
every word, perfect. Enjoyed all and shall do so again. I feel inspired to paint. ~Tier |
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